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Sep 04, 2007 4:59 pm |
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re: I need your honest opinion please |
Eileen Brown
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I read most of the comments and only have a few questions to ask. Some of the replies are quite correct. Some are noteworty and nicely put and some are a bit, um... rude-ish.
Why would anyone want to target such a small age group of people?
Does anyone in that age group have enough experience to actully help each other?
Who and where is the expert these people will follow? You need to list at least ONE. One in each field would be best. Experts usually have a few years under their belts in the real world so finding someone who is say 30-35 who can actually be of service with good, solid business advice might be a tad difficult.
The site itself is very good looking. You did a nice job there. The text content is (semi) professional but does have a few rought spots. Something to work on.
You do still need a hook, as has already been spewed out above in other comments.
Keep a positive attitude, make some adjustments and ask again.
"That" that does not kill you, makes you stronger.
Have a great and blessed day.
Eileen :) www.bekansas.com www.buddywebworks.comPrivate Reply to Eileen Brown (new win) |
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